A Market Full Of Rules Comments

to many rules to live by, freedom comes with a cost a strong write

Freedom itself is a rule to obey.

You address a worthy cause and concern. Unfortunately too many think that the solution is laws, laws, and more laws or that wars are the answer. But freedom was never 100 percent free. We must live within limits and pay a price too often set and determined by others.

Great to see your work on both sides. You have some very humorous witty poems, but then you read this very serious look at the world. I tend to hope that we are just going through a 'bad' time, but it sure does not appear to be improving. Thanks for your perspective.

Unfortunately, all too true. I fear that humanity has fallen into a 'New Dark Ages.'

nice one and very true, well written.

You are so right...so many rules..so little room for us..just to bee...and to become what we were meant to be..you make me think and think again This is such an outstanding poem! ! Pia

AGAIN, I THINK YOU HAVE JOGGED THE THINKING PERSONS INTRIGUE...I LIKE THIS SUZAN...WELL CRAFTED WORK, INDEED. FJR