Friday, December 1, 2006

A Market Full Of Rules Comments

Rating: 4.8

Freedom is turning
Into a market full of rules
How dare they intrude
upon our livestlyles and existance
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suzan gumush
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Chitra - 09 December 2008

to many rules to live by, freedom comes with a cost a strong write

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 26 November 2008

Freedom itself is a rule to obey.

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Ben Gieske 10 September 2008

You address a worthy cause and concern. Unfortunately too many think that the solution is laws, laws, and more laws or that wars are the answer. But freedom was never 100 percent free. We must live within limits and pay a price too often set and determined by others.

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Michael Shaffer 06 September 2008

Great to see your work on both sides. You have some very humorous witty poems, but then you read this very serious look at the world. I tend to hope that we are just going through a 'bad' time, but it sure does not appear to be improving. Thanks for your perspective.

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David Kowalczyk 07 January 2008

Unfortunately, all too true. I fear that humanity has fallen into a 'New Dark Ages.'

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Jim Foulk 19 January 2007

nice one and very true, well written.

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Pia Andersson 09 December 2006

You are so right...so many rules..so little room for us..just to bee...and to become what we were meant to be..you make me think and think again This is such an outstanding poem! ! Pia

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Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr 03 December 2006

AGAIN, I THINK YOU HAVE JOGGED THE THINKING PERSONS INTRIGUE...I LIKE THIS SUZAN...WELL CRAFTED WORK, INDEED. FJR

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