Wednesday, July 1, 2009

A Mariner's Homecoming Comments

Rating: 5.0

Be ready for some rough and tumble, my love.
Tonight I come as the wild man
Home from the mythic seas of yore.
I sailed the Doldrums and the dreaded triangle
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Eddie Roa
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Lynda Robson 10 July 2009

Romantic write and I liked the repetition of the first line, 10 Lynda xx

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Ency Bearis 02 July 2009

romantic write...expressed well of a mariners feeling away from home...and the anxiety within to see the love one...10

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Carol Gall 01 July 2009

passionate poem written beautifully 10

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Mubeen Sadhika 01 July 2009

Nice poem. Pl read my poems and send your comments.

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Eddie Roa

Eddie Roa

Manila. Philippines
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