* A Marathon Between Life And Time Comments

A marathon well lit with a factual description my Dear poet. We run throughout our lives but still time wins the marathon in the end. Anyhow.....acceptence to what life creates for us and realizing for what we do to life is the only way one can adopt to participate in this marathon between time and life.

Well said. Life has its moments of Glory and moments of unhappiness. The effort we put gives us the satisfaction when we achieve that goal we set.

nyc poem! ! very meaning full! ! keep up da awesome work: D

a meaningful poem.fine writing voted10 surya

a meaningful poem.fine writing voted10 surya

very nicely penned keep up the good work dear Faran anjali

Faran, what a thoughtful piece my friend, filled with imagery that projects this great poem to a new level....well crafted bro 10

WoWwwwwwwww..i just love ittttttttttt..from first word to the last filled by excellent unique wonderful thoughts and images..loved it's end too..check my poem the same race which speak about the life and the time and how we live in haste................excellent..one of m, y favorite...........

nicely penned... and very true