Friday, February 13, 2009

A Mansion Of Bliss Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love was agape
And earth too began to shake
When they saw divine and his lover
in a secret soul's bower
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Dr Hitesh Sheth
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Kee Thampi 07 January 2012

nature is the mother of humanity the saviour During blushing daybreak they surreptitiously escaped to roam on love drawn map on Venus landscapes Wherein flows, love kissed lakes

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divine romance there...lovely

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Obinna Eruchie 28 May 2009

a beautiful romantic poem with vivid imagery.

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again an other beautiful reading...

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Bonnie Collins 14 April 2009

What a lovely romantic write, and filled with much vivid imagery... Very nice job....

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Kranthi Pothineni 09 April 2009

Really sweet and romantic. Nice.

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Cindy Kreiner Sera 05 April 2009

Beautiful this lover's myth unfolding - pure romanticism...a rose is a rose but brilliance comes in many forms - you have Mastered all. Cindy

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Written with the ink of passionate love.Thanks for sharing.

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I feel a lot of love i love it lol.. Its a nice and great poem so nice its a ten Krista

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Randy Hogan 24 February 2009

Woven into the fabric of time thou love as been spoken, raise her Veil of love and remove from her lip for taste you seek, sublime ambrosia........... this poem is a piece of art....loves art....master piece.......

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Miriam Maia Padua 23 February 2009

a poetry that is adorned with priceless stones...very meaningful very valuable.....gleaming with beauty... and touching our hearts....divinely..a MANSION of love... a mansion of Soul...a mansion where God dwells... very wholesome..words are superbly chosen.... and the theme is chosen from heart.... a piece with wonderful imagery... i love this...goes to my favorites... 10+++

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 21 February 2009

A mansion of huge poetry you have got there my friend.

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Seema Chowdhury 14 February 2009

lovely thoughts and emotions expressed in this poem. thanks for sharing.

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! ~ RAJNISH JENA ~! 14 February 2009

superb written sir.well expressed and nice feelings... really a god gift to all poets here as valenties day gift....

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C. P. Sharma 14 February 2009

A majestic mansion with glitter and gleam in which the divine lovers dance in trance. Superbly unique imagery with scrupulously chosen scholatic diction and perfect flow. CP

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Vinod Kumar 14 February 2009

Expression of a divine love built in a strong seamless base, there is no chance to oxidation of that in the worthy mansion, thank you dear Dr.Poet,10++

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Catrina Heart 14 February 2009

A poem written fabulously woven with great rhymes and rhythm of the words...Beautiful lovers myth, soulful romanticism..10+++

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Sathyanarayana M V S 14 February 2009

Good descriptive poem. The union of 'Prakrithi' and 'Purusha', the divine couple........a novel subject attempted.

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Sadiqullah Khan 14 February 2009

The choice of title and what follows is a beautiful rythmic composition with an effort on rhyme. Well woven thoughts and fantastic imaginations.10

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very lovely. enjoyed it in its entirety

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