Friday, May 28, 2010

'A Man With No Love' Comments

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I will wait! I will wait! !
for the best of the best
I will wait! I will wait! !
for as long as i may
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CHRISTOPHER EBENEZER
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Darrin Mcmiller Jr. 14 June 2010

The message was well recieved, part of love is patience and you have to pay attention

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Kolawole Ajao 04 June 2010

You are darn right! Like butressing Rudyard Kipling's voice: 'If you can wait and not be tired waiting.... Write more!

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Iron Panda 23™ 04 June 2010

nice write! ! ! ! !

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Lady Grace 03 June 2010

wait.....this is a good song too..

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Becca Moore 03 June 2010

tis is really good i loves it! !

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Lucia Domingos Fula 02 June 2010

I will wait! I will wait! ! for the best of the best I will wait! I will wait! ! for as long as i may. (that's my favourite verse) I love this poem especially the way you use the repetition.and the way you put the words together.the poem is beautiful very beautiful.keep it up and keep more coming.i love this poem so much! ! ! ! wow i 'm just speechless! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! very speechless actually! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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CHRISTOPHER EBENEZER

CHRISTOPHER EBENEZER

Kaduna, Nigeria
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