A Man With A Black Coat! Comments

Yes. Truly said. Life is drab without its surprises.

All that is well, since it ended well. The black with hat also must be hiding to give a pleasant surprise. A pleasant imagery, enjoyed reading it.... A nice poem

A nice write, that needs to think whether it was a dream or a pleasant surprise. If it was a dream it reflects a desire in black coating of fears and if it really happened its a lovely pleasant surprise but the question remains why he was hiding himself. In any case a beautiful poem.

Absolutely right. A beautiful experience mem. Thanks

Life is meaningful when surprises Come on our way...nice one...10 life is stable if there is no trouble life is hard if there is no way forward

This is like a suspense movie ending in beautiful notes of love, ecstasy and emotions...............Geetha...... very nicely composed...............

wonderful feelings. and you are right too.

Ha! As I expected! Who else but your beloved can make you fearful and loved at the same time? These little things, I believe are the pleasure of life..Good write!

Loved it. It was a great time.

just gripping a verse-story...you have the dramatics Geetha! ! ! A strong write! ! !

a poem full of mystery good to know it was the beloved one. a good write

A mystery poem with a beautiful ending..luvd it

So many emotions in your poem, I loved it.

I can feel the curiosity i can feel the emotions i can feel the terror at the end, i smile too, willy-nilly :) loved it thanks for sharing

A good build up of suspense that turns into a lovely surprise that create's such wondeful feelings! Lovely write!

It was my beloved Nice surprise. Maybe he also changed his gait. Beautiful poem. Thank you.

Very mysterious Geetha but you've left the reader thinking is this a true person or your imagination? I often see someone I've known in a crowded street but when I approach I find it isn't, and I discover that it was my mind playing tricks on me.

Great ending ma'am. Life without surprises would be so bland. A little adrenalin rush every now & then, is so necessary to keep it fighting fit.

Really great poem/ story with a great ending.

Why not you observe his postures Why not you observe his movements Try to observe more To know more about your sweetheart Abou