Tuesday, April 14, 2009

A Man Who I Use To Know Comments

Rating: 4.8

Blood running down my arms
Taking every ounce of pain out of me
It feels like nothing of a mad man
Crying to die hoping to be killed by some one else
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Robin Miller 29 June 2010

wow nick this one here i like it cuz it has alot of thought and there is some sadness in it but other then that i like the end of it when he drooped the gun at the end

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L. Rigyra Nidro 19 June 2009

sad poem, I liked how he dropped the gun at the end. suicide is never the answer!

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pink strawberry 22 April 2009

a sad story, but it was really goood! keep it up my friend!

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 15 April 2009

It is very sad to know a dying man. A lifetime rememberance.

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