Saturday, July 21, 2007

A Man's Dream Comments

Rating: 5.0

A house
of stone and glass,
built above the ocean,
reflects the sunlight
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Marc Mannheimer
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Duncan Wyllie 22 May 2008

Dear Marc The first thing that came to my mind after reading this is: Should you be an Author, this poem has all the hallmarks of an imaganitive mind, someone who can really bring a story to life, , , , , Any thoughts on this? Eitherway, , take care Love duncan X

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Al Ramos 31 December 2007

We live to dream and dream to live, but I haven't met that lady of my dreams yet.

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Ivor Hogg 12 October 2007

You have encapsulated the main elements of everymans dream I think and presented it a dream like constructive manner, Which appeals even to an ardent formalist like me

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Etebom Ekpo 24 September 2007

This is truly the Dream of every, the most creative mind, the most beautiful lady, the best place and the most wonderful moment

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