A Man's Desire In Life Comments

nice......kp penning.......

Wow a wonderful flow of words from your pen. Ending is beautiful...Loved reading it.

well done! is it just all about a ''man'''s desire? ?

well done................................anjana, , , its actually a nice poem..written in just 15 min. i also onvote u to read mine..[specially hindi]

Very good poem shows the real talent in you....

I made a small mistake to forget her after 10 years desires still lingers beyond her foot when she smiled me kept scilent when she laughed me put mask when she admired me roared barring the limit now after a long period she disguise in my every walk no, nothing powered me but no desire ruled me

Within just 15 minutes...a great idea beautifully came out..! Wonderful...great job! !

Hi. I believe the one who knows best becomes silent. Shallow water makes more noise. So thought power won't break the silence. I think it's a good poem. I like the powers that you mentioned and I like the last stanza the most. I'd be glad if you comment on my poems too. Thanks.

i like the ending part the most, the consequence is great and fine. nice poem.

good and interesting...

nice lines interesting and readable cheers

all these desires ride the peope forward, without desires we achieve nothing, well written poetess.

he desire of indifference-power ragged him down beyond his imagination. very narrow road we ride to power fails to gain

a true pic of the soul mind in words he desire of indifference-power ragged him down beyond his imagination.