Wednesday, April 30, 2008

A Man's Best Friend Part-Ii (A Story) Comments

Rating: 3.2

It was Friday morning.I was going in the little village of Arowali. My vacation had just began.My parents thought it would be a good idea to visit the village after a hectic exam.The trian slowly chugged into the station.We had to go another 3 miles by cartwheel pulled by ox.My grandparents once lived in that village.After they were over sixty they moved with us into the city.Our house was looked after by a chowkidar(a kind of secretary) .We slowly advanced towards the house.The fields were lush green and was so long i couldn't see the end, it disappeared into the horizon.

After 15 minutes, we reached our house.It was a little broken down and looked shabby but i was not dismayed about it, it gave me a feeling of adventure.People often spoke of ghosts and spirits.Although i cannot say whether it was a superstition, but to say the truth the nights were very creepy.It was all silent with the occasional buzz of insects and snakes.
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David Harris 01 June 2008

Another wonderful write with a touching climax. Animals will often adopt humans to look after them and not the other way around as a lot of people think. We refer as owning a dog or a cat, but in fact they own us. more often than not they will attach themselves to one of the members of the household. Top marks and thanks for sharing this my friend, David

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Abha Sharma 30 April 2008

very good sentiment...but I see the craze for the foreign breeds...here in Jaipur many Dog shows are conducted but all exibiting their special and rare breeds...Let this mission of yours be successful... very well composed, liked reading it.

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