Saturday, September 5, 2009

A Man Of Worth Comments

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Dear Uncle Fred's the type of man
Who to his neighbours gives a hand.
A man who would not deal in lies,
Who never could a soul despise.
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John Soltis 10 February 2010

Hi! Dave! - Just read again your poem about Uncle 'Fred'. I sort of enjoyed this poem to some degree (voted a 6/10) as you had only kind words to say about him with admirable ryhming words. I think what troubled me was probably because I knew him only on the surface - that you did not totally capture Fred beyond his facade ie. What really made this guy tick? ? Believe he may deserve another poem From your Buddy- Chubby Dog..

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