Comes a knock on my door
I open it......
Dressed inside a suit
He stands tall
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Too often, poems take such a dark route...it is fun to just let the laugh out once in a while! Good One.
Love this poem. Read it over several times, It draws you to the end, knowing there is a 'punch line' coming.
Suzan, I can understand most any man falling for that fashion, Yet again... you have surprised me. B.V.A.
...i am a man of many fashions...myself...just kidding...this is a very witty poem...
Quite witty. The suitor's final costume is the only honest one.
This is a clever piece, nicely constructed with a light-hearted touch and a very witty conclusion. Great fun Suzan. love, Allie xxxxxxxx
nice touch to this poem, flow right along up to the very end, loved the ending, nice one.
Suzan...Levity & Innovation doth make the complete POET ! Entertaining & smacking of much cleverity, my dear... frank
a cleverly worded and a cheekily bouyant text that hold the reader enthralled until the last when the poet is enthralled well done rgds mike
Why all the fashion when you don't need any clothes at all. Love it. Thanks for your comment about my poem. Kristoffer
Interesting write, Suzan... different, but well suited. Good stuff! Brian
'Kick over the traces'. And it's very hard to trace this man?
I am shocked as well. Suzan, shame on you. A well constructed writing. A wonderful tale. Great creativity. Sometimes, the simplest things make the best reads. Congratulations! A winner! GW62