I LIKE THE LINE 'I WILL JOIN THE MAN TOGETHER WITH THE STARS'-i think it is a nice line
and your entire poem is very beautiful
you succeeded in painting a story worth reading
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I LIKE THE LINE 'I WILL JOIN THE MAN TOGETHER WITH THE STARS'-i think it is a nice line and your entire poem is very beautiful you succeeded in painting a story worth reading