A Man Dies Several Times A Day Comments

Well crafted... especially powerful ending.

A vivid picture of a human life's journey is given by you so touchingly in this poem with nice penmanship. I feel each line is impressive. Yet I want to cite most important lines here are....No doubt, he wii be physically dead soon / Still he has to die several times every day / Until ultimate destination of life is attained. An insightful poem is well executed.10

oh the death comes frequently when the fickle mind cannot fulfill its desire, hope, demand, dreams.....! ! !