Tuesday, October 26, 2010

A Man And His Old Dam Comments

Rating: 4.9

He had to return to that old, old dam,
Where he often roamed as a lad;
To see it crumbling, eroding away,
Left him pensive, reflective and sad-
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Joseph Anderson
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Thomas Vaughan Jones 16 February 2014

All things must pass Joseph, but before we fade away, you and I must endeavour to record as many of these memories as we can. If they bring a tear, so be it. Thes are our moments. 10.

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Anthony Cabal 21 October 2012

GREAT WRITE! keep it up.

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Valsa George 20 October 2012

These 'twilight broodings' make me inexpressibly sad! ! A poem touching the very core of heart from someone who has watched the ebb and flow of life more than many here! ! This deserves a great 10

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Walterrean Salley 29 May 2012

How beautiful. Even inanimate things have a place, becoming such a part of our life-often with deep emotional connection. I really felt this one. Good.10

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Smoky Hoss 22 December 2010

This is a poem of such simple, yet pure beauty, straight from the depths of being truly human. Great poem Joseph.

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Pranab K Chakraborty 26 October 2010

Its not nostalgia, not the lamentation but a free-heart tribute as word can contribute its meaning to communicate. Pardon me, while I wipe some tears....... Yes, at least one or two dropp is expected at its last otherwise no difference of human with other animals. 10/10 Regards, pranab

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