A Man And A Bird (Part 3) Comments

A very vivid remembrance of boyhood. Very touching write. There are things we did in our childhood that we want to amend as we go through adulthood. A great poem.10

I shot a bird with a bb gun when I was young. I have never gotten over it either.

excellent imagery of like my childhood too.. when a threw a stone out of my window to slap the moon mom said son she is a gal take care next day i picked a catapult and struck the sun she said son don't kill the sun he is life in you and me from where will find food if the sun is killed by you then I took up a knife to kill the cat she said son yeah mom now I know it kill none we all ae simply one pert of the GLORIOUS SUN you and I amongst one

The poem is packed with some very heartfelt imagery. And the final question is extremely touching.

I have to avenge a misdeed, a boyhood fun, Regret! I killed a moon with my pellet gun, When found her sun crying on the same branch, I picked my air gun and killed the sun. A beautiful couple of singing birds in love, Are you a rebirth of that innocent dove? .......touching expression with a nice theme. It is a beautiful poem on bird and man. Thanks for sharing.

The misdeeds of youth recalled. This proves we have matured.++10