Sunday, June 10, 2018

A Man And A Bird (Part 2) Comments

Rating: 5.0

It's a pleasant and lovely morning,
I see you again my flying sweetheart!
Exploring corners of the verandah,
You look worried but for what?
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Akhtar Jawad
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Dr Dillip K Swain 16 June 2018

I understand, no hunger, no thirst/You have been loved again and again…excellent words! Loved reading this beautiful poem! (10)

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 12 June 2018

You have the heart of gold to nature all your love you seem to have sold

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Kelly Kurt 11 June 2018

I knew you were a lover of all life. Continue to experience joy from all that surrounds you.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 11 June 2018

A wonderful and thoughtful poem. Your love, care and kindness towards birds are manifested in this profound write. It shows the other side of man. Another great poem from a great poet.10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 11 June 2018

I loved, reproduced and proved my life, I realize the worries of a carrying wife........here is the essence of the poem. Beautifully crafted poem.10

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Robert Murray Smith 11 June 2018

A nice poem about nature.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 11 June 2018

Akhtar, such a splendid write....10+++++

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Rini Shibu 11 June 2018

Wonderful poem full of love towards birds

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