Sunday, June 10, 2018

A Man And A Bird (Part 1) Comments

Rating: 5.0

Rest here you sweet little bird,
Why are you afraid of me?
In the verandah adjacent to my room
Through the glasses I want to see,
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M Asim Nehal 23 August 2018

This Bird is a symbol of life, the trust we have on our soul to guide us in this world is nicely written, Yet another Great poem, a master stroke with brilliant metaphor.

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 11 June 2018

the bird knowing that you have composed on her.... will come now with her loved one...and sing songs for you- - this i say out of experience my parrot....who I let fly from his cage after he had recovered from his injury returned and again took a grains from my hands.. but never again returned we are as you say only human the parrot was ntelligent

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 10 June 2018

A very insightful and thought provoking poem. Birds are always free spirited creature. Yet, sometimes they are intimidated in the presence of human beings for fear that they might be captured and used them for fun. Marvelous piece of work.10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 10 June 2018

An elegant piece of work! The theme of this beautiful poem is as naive as the bird displayed in the picture! 10

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Kelly Kurt 10 June 2018

A beautiful poem. One can read much into it and learn.

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Nosheen Irfan 10 June 2018

Very profound work from your poetic pen. A sure 10.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 June 2018

I am looking at you with my true love But you are looking with doubts and fears Right! Being a human I can't be trusted You flown back giving me just tears. I couldn't tell I wanted only inspiration Against hospitality of rest and recreation! .......so touching and philosophical. A marvelous poem shared astutely. Thanks.10

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