Wednesday, June 13, 2018

A Man And A Bird (Final Part) Comments

Rating: 5.0

A very hot morning I'm waiting for her
Having fulfilled my promise of a nest.
Here comes a couple of dove to love
Drink water, enjoy love, and at rest.
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Susan Williams 17 June 2018

Imagine how happily I shall take my spouse / To drink immortality to love somewhere. / I'm a bird for me something has been promised / Believe, and sure the promise will be fulfilled.- - ] What a delightful image to carry your message on! ! 10

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 June 2018

another guy feeds ants across the road all life is EQUAL ALL HAVE LIVING SOULS TILL ALL LIVE AFTER that God only knows what is it 'tis

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 15 June 2018

I have a neighbour who also is a bird lover feeds all as many daily another guy feeds ants across the road all life is

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Kelly Kurt 13 June 2018

I find it difficult that you truly believe that. I hope you enjoy it none-the-less.

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 13 June 2018

A wonderful series. I enjoyed reading them all. Beautifully crafted write.10

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 June 2018

Sure! ! The Promise will be fulfilled! One day. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 June 2018

Yes, it's really an enjoyable series! Loved reading this episode!

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Robert Murray Smith 13 June 2018

An imaginative write with great imagery. An enjoyable series.++10

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Bernard F. Asuncion 13 June 2018

Akhtar, such a stupendous write.....10+++++

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