Wednesday, May 31, 2006

A Man, A Cloak, A Gondola Comments

Rating: 5.0

A Man, A Cloak, a Gondola,
A Subterranean Sea.
These Four recurring Elements
Compose a Mystery.
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Sophia White
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Dee Daffodil 31 May 2006

Cool! ! I really liked this poem. Interesting concept. Well done! Hugs, Dee

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Will Barber 31 May 2006

A religious philosopher said that the essential religious experience was awe - that the Mystery must remain unreduced to rational explanations in order to retain its power. This very lovely poem manages to awe and mystify. It also echos a good many mythological resonances. Truly impressive. And VERY well-written.

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