Sunday, January 29, 2023

A Mall Encounter Comments

Rating: 5.0

We're at the mall
My wife and I
We're walking hand in hand
Like a pair of teenagers in love
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D.N. Rebb
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Kesav Venkat Easwaran 03 February 2023

Bhukowski influence or not, your prose poem is quite absorbing to read. Most of us had such hugs- full or half. Tfs

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Richard Wlodarski 29 January 2023

Before I even read your notes, I was already seeing the great Bukowski's influence. So, if you've done him good, Rebb! Great poem, my friend. Hopefully, your wife won't see it. And if she does...Bukowski may find a new fan!

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