We're at the mall
My wife and I
We're walking hand in hand
Like a pair of teenagers in love
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Before I even read your notes, I was already seeing the great Bukowski's influence. So, if you've done him good, Rebb! Great poem, my friend. Hopefully, your wife won't see it. And if she does...Bukowski may find a new fan!
Bhukowski influence or not, your prose poem is quite absorbing to read. Most of us had such hugs- full or half. Tfs