Friday, December 19, 2008

A Maidens Prayer Comments

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I was naïve I trusted you,
just as you always meant me to.
You were convincing when you lied
but when your lust was satisfied.
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ivor or ivor.e hogg
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Adeline Foster 09 September 2010

I like it Ivor, You said it for a good many people. Adeline

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They say revenge is sweet, so is this maidens prayer, be it, sweet revenge unto her! Interesting poem, enjoyed the read; D

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Mel Vincent Basconcillo 20 April 2009

this is a marvelous poem my friend.. greatly done and well expressed

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Christine Kerr 27 February 2009

This one hit so close to my heart, What a Keeper

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Ron Flowers 27 December 2008

Well penned Ivor. Regards Ron

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