A Maiden's Surrender Comments

Defintely a romantics poetry M'Lady

a great piece of poetry patricia+

Another great one. I love the line, 'Your lips form my name and all is silent but thine words.'

I trust a good knight (English UK spelling!) was had by all! Lovely stuff.

A very heartfelt and moving piece! Great stuff Patricia! Top marks! -Michael

Defintely one of the romantics m 'Lady A group to which I am proud to belong The archaic language adds to the pleasure

Romantic writing is definitely your forte Patricia. Congrats on another tenner. I'll try in the near future to try and stay outta the heated sun. God bless all cool poets-MJG.

Patricia, it's as if you have a direct portal to my mind, the parts that even I try to escape from! (LOL!) You write romance so very well and I know these feelings deeply, this poem resonates for all of those reasons! Oh yes, meant to say, beautiful piece of poetry, I hope he hears your call..... HG: -) xx

What a most cherished and beautiful Love Sonnet! You've done it again, by golly, by garsh! Blessings, sweet one, Theo

when it comes to romantic poetry you really do your thing, and write great ones.

This one did pull some romantic chords of miss and lost love. I enjoyed your poem.

Inervating work, Princess Patricia...AND HOW YOU KNOW HOW TO PULL THOSE CHORDS OF ROMANCE! fjr