A Maiden's Plea Comments

A valuable virtue that is still alive even though in the minority. A rich and refreshing rhyme scheme my friend!

Again...Very nice. Perfect flow and great rhythm.

I like this one Val. Nice to see some common sense is still around.

so nice a will dedicated to a maiden...........chastity must be upheld.............keep writing!

Magnificent ode, not so much old fashioned as well groomed with etiquette which in todays age of show and tell is not a bad thing to have. This shows a pride that many a young women should take care to see. Your language Is rich and reminiscent of classics. A Fine maiden who shines a beacon of temperance and love. Cool read

Do I love this, Oh, yes!

Well, bravo, somebody STILL has some Morals. Aside being a wonderful Poet, I always knew you were a Lady. Lovely, warm blooded poem, really liked, thank you, S

An old fashioned ditty, but great structure and rhymes. Sentiments definitely predate the sexual revolution.

Old fashioned in the eyes of the new generation! But it fathoms deep into the root of the sacred values of life and upholds the sanctity of marriage! I love this poem and give you a 10

full of wisdom all forbidden things are racing all round the thing earlier were not permitted now a days society accept well writ

These words confirm the maiden`s most striking credibility as a lady in waiting. Marriage is the true union of minds and I think in the West too more of you ought to get married like we the Indians do. Hope this maiden will find her true life partner soon.

Though an old fashioned ditty it is best! Marriage should be sacred! So lovely, Valerie!

my how things have changed.... this may be read so many ways...nostalgia and maybe dry humour primarily...tyvm syn

Beautifully written and a good plea for marriage. Thanks for sharing. BB: O)

A great poem, less and less people marry these days. Maybe we should go back to how it used to be.

This is deep wish in the heart of all maidens...this is what they are created for, I believe. So thumbs up for giving voice to purest feelings.

The only way to travel in life with this old fashioned ditty singing out the maidens plea written so easy to read, clever to boot...regards

when a girl sleeps with a male, her intention is to marry him and lead a blissful life..When our society and culture take this responsibility, the burden is laid with a young and naive maiden in certain culture..very sad, but people say it is all right. The message from the heart of a maiden, Dear Vale Dohren...10

I ain't never heard nothin like this before, love it.

I used to know a few ditties when I was in the military! It flows beautifully as usual from your great poems.