Tuesday, April 11, 2017

A Magnet Comments

Rating: 4.7

I know it's me who has been attracted by you,
neither I am silver like the moon,
nor I am gold like the sun.
I am just a pin made of iron.
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Savita Tyagi 16 April 2017

Love topped with a child's innocent smile indeed is a magnet that attracts us all. A childlike love we have to develop for all.

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 April 2017

An attractive simile indeed. Thanks

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Khalid Saifullah 12 April 2017

A beautiful poem, a lovely topic.

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Valsa George 11 April 2017

A beautiful poem with a beautiful message to accompany it!

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Randhir Kaur 11 April 2017

It is extremely beautiful. Child love. I literally have no words Sir. Could relate somewhat With respect

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Geetha Jayakumar 11 April 2017

Beautiful words got attracted into a wonderful poem. Let it attract everyone like the child innocence. Beautiful message. Loved reading it. Attractive picture.

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