A Magnet Poem by Akhtar Jawad

A Magnet

Rating: 4.7


I know it's me who has been attracted by you,
neither I am silver like the moon,
nor I am gold like the sun.
I am just a pin made of iron.
But when you hugged me
a magic entered in me
I have been magnetized
and started attracting other pins.
Look at the child playing
with pins in love of a magnet.
My God! The child has been magnetized, too!
How attractive is the child!
I must kiss his hands
though not a magic for me,
but the magic of joy that has made him
so much cute
is a wonder for me.
He is a child who is made of flush and bone
but he became a magnet
when he enjoyed something amazing.
May this joy develop in a magnetic force of beauty
and when this child grows up in a handsome man
may he enjoy humans sticking like pins
to the magnet of love.

A Magnet
Tuesday, April 11, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: magnet
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Geetha Jayakumar 11 April 2017

Beautiful words got attracted into a wonderful poem. Let it attract everyone like the child innocence. Beautiful message. Loved reading it. Attractive picture.

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Savita Tyagi 16 April 2017

Love topped with a child's innocent smile indeed is a magnet that attracts us all. A childlike love we have to develop for all.

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Jazib Kamalvi 12 April 2017

An attractive simile indeed. Thanks

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Khalid Saifullah 12 April 2017

A beautiful poem, a lovely topic.

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Valsa George 11 April 2017

A beautiful poem with a beautiful message to accompany it!

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Randhir Kaur 11 April 2017

It is extremely beautiful. Child love. I literally have no words Sir. Could relate somewhat With respect

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