I saw blue sky over a blue sky
Mountains flying with clouds
Million stars sparking on earth
And trees running by my side
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wonderful visual metaphors I saw a sun kissing a sun Ocean playing with the birds Million fishes dancing in air And sand grains walking along wonderful descriptive poem 10/10
Solitude is the common factor I find in the three stanzas...a free surrealistic thinking....interesting
The surrealism in the poem is very good. But it should have been connected to some realistic thing in the end to give the poem more flavour.
A magical poem in a magical season keeps the reader entralled++++10 regards
truly magical with the figurative languages you used like an oxymorons...fire/ice...coldness and love or hatred and platonic state....lovely poem
This is very beautiful the images come to life in my head as I read...10s sorry p.h has a problem I can't vote....Merry Christmas and God bless you and your family
Yes, life is full of magical moments. All we need is the right perception. Very well expressed.
A very nice nature poem.