Monday, December 21, 2009

A Magical Season Comments

Rating: 5.0

I saw blue sky over a blue sky
Mountains flying with clouds
Million stars sparking on earth
And trees running by my side
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Kranthi Pothineni
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A very nice nature poem.

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Marieta Maglas 07 January 2010

wonderful visual metaphors I saw a sun kissing a sun Ocean playing with the birds Million fishes dancing in air And sand grains walking along wonderful descriptive poem 10/10

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Dr.ram Mehta 01 January 2010

I appreciate the rhythm in the poem

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Indira Renganathan 30 December 2009

Solitude is the common factor I find in the three stanzas...a free surrealistic thinking....interesting

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Sathyanarayana M V S 28 December 2009

The surrealism in the poem is very good. But it should have been connected to some realistic thing in the end to give the poem more flavour.

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Ken E Hall 28 December 2009

A magical poem in a magical season keeps the reader entralled++++10 regards

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Louis Rams 22 December 2009

nicely written, and it carries you along.

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Anju Addanki 22 December 2009

its just so cute and lovely

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Catrina Heart 22 December 2009

truly magical with the figurative languages you used like an oxymorons...fire/ice...coldness and love or hatred and platonic state....lovely poem

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 22 December 2009

a very magical and poetic poem you have here...

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Eyan Desir 22 December 2009

This is very beautiful the images come to life in my head as I read...10s sorry p.h has a problem I can't vote....Merry Christmas and God bless you and your family

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Padmapriya Boddapati 22 December 2009

Yes, life is full of magical moments. All we need is the right perception. Very well expressed.

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Rajaram Ramachandran 21 December 2009

A Magical poem indeed describing magical moments.

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Walterrean Salley 21 December 2009

A lovely poetic waltz.

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Joseph Poewhit 21 December 2009

Words have a glow--

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