Monday, December 5, 2016

A Magic Spectacle Comments

Rating: 4.7

Staying at the western brink of the sky
The Sun opens his fiery third eye
A red tint abruptly colours the sky
With chiffon clouds floating high
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Valsa George
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Indira Renganathan 20 July 2019

'The Sun opens his fiery third eye'...this means a lot..a different view of visioning Sun's functioning...a beautiful write on sunset Valsa

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Kumarmani Mahakul 26 May 2019

As God dips his brush in colours dazzling Every sunset becomes a beautiful painting This magic spectacle, we stand watching Till the last streak of light begins waning! .....nice poetic expression. Beautiful poem is amazingly shared.10

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Akhtar Jawad 07 April 2017

As God dips his brush in colours dazzling Every sunset becomes a beautiful painting......................the poem is a painting itself.

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Susan Williams 14 January 2017

How in the world did I miss reading this exquisite poem until now? This is magnificent. You have written a score of gorgeous poems but at this moment I have to say this is the best. - - - - - chiffon clouds - - - - - - Down they descend before the fall of night - - - - - - Shining in the glimmering twilight The Earth and the sky look a lovely sight Raining down showers of delight Our souls are buoyed up to magic height- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - AND THEN THIS STUNNING CLOSING- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - As God dips his brush in colours dazzling Every sunset becomes a beautiful painting This magic spectacle, we stand watching Till the last streak of light begins waning! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This is my favorite Valsa poem, it doesn't just speak to my soul, it sings to it. A million 10's and a posting to my favorite poems. Thank you for writing this, Valsa.

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Valsa George 16 January 2017

Susan, you make me feel glorified! Thank you so much dear friend! Only great minds make others feel great!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 17 December 2016

Raining down showers of delight That rain is eternal and your poem is a great delight.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 10 December 2016

A beautiful poem having thrilling expression. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Thanks.,10

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Jaishree Nair 07 December 2016

Magical flow of words with superb rhyming ease.An amazing drop...

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Clarence Prince 07 December 2016

Shinning in the glimmering twilight Raining down showers of delight God dips His brush in colours of dazzling Oh wonderful is our God? He gives to man wonderful words to write!

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Akhtar Jawad 06 December 2016

Though most of the women are proficient in description but if it's Valsa something becomes the everything.

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Valsa George 06 December 2016

Thank you Akhtar ji for this great compliment !

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Madathil Rajendran Nair 05 December 2016

Your poem is a delightful magic spectacle. A painting that even the creator of the sunset it describes would envy. (10)

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Nosheen Irfan 05 December 2016

A great descriptive write. A perfect flow of words, rhythmical n musical. How you manage the rhyme throughout is a feat. A glorious sunset. A 10

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Simone Inez Harriman 05 December 2016

A lovely poem Valsa. How fortunate that we can all enjoy the glorious sky's rich tapestry of vivid color.

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Edward Kofi Louis 05 December 2016

The blazing light! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 05 December 2016

As God dips his brush in colours dazzling Every sunset becomes a beautiful painting This magic spectacle, we stand watching Till the last streak of light begins waning! Thanks for sharing it.10 for it.

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Jayatissa K. Liyanage 05 December 2016

Wow! What a spectacular painting of a colorful, eventful and magical evening. A gift long waited for from a able personality. Thanks Valsa for sharing the mind soothing rhythmic treat.

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