Staying at the western brink of the sky
The Sun opens his fiery third eye
A red tint abruptly colours the sky
With chiffon clouds floating high
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As God dips his brush in colours dazzling Every sunset becomes a beautiful painting This magic spectacle, we stand watching Till the last streak of light begins waning! .....nice poetic expression. Beautiful poem is amazingly shared.10
As God dips his brush in colours dazzling Every sunset becomes a beautiful painting......................the poem is a painting itself.
How in the world did I miss reading this exquisite poem until now? This is magnificent. You have written a score of gorgeous poems but at this moment I have to say this is the best. - - - - - chiffon clouds - - - - - - Down they descend before the fall of night - - - - - - Shining in the glimmering twilight The Earth and the sky look a lovely sight Raining down showers of delight Our souls are buoyed up to magic height- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - AND THEN THIS STUNNING CLOSING- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - As God dips his brush in colours dazzling Every sunset becomes a beautiful painting This magic spectacle, we stand watching Till the last streak of light begins waning! - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - This is my favorite Valsa poem, it doesn't just speak to my soul, it sings to it. A million 10's and a posting to my favorite poems. Thank you for writing this, Valsa.
Susan, you make me feel glorified! Thank you so much dear friend! Only great minds make others feel great!
Raining down showers of delight That rain is eternal and your poem is a great delight.
A beautiful poem having thrilling expression. Enjoyed with attractive photo provided. Thanks.,10
Magical flow of words with superb rhyming ease.An amazing drop...
Shinning in the glimmering twilight Raining down showers of delight God dips His brush in colours of dazzling Oh wonderful is our God? He gives to man wonderful words to write!
Though most of the women are proficient in description but if it's Valsa something becomes the everything.
Your poem is a delightful magic spectacle. A painting that even the creator of the sunset it describes would envy. (10)
A great descriptive write. A perfect flow of words, rhythmical n musical. How you manage the rhyme throughout is a feat. A glorious sunset. A 10
A lovely poem Valsa. How fortunate that we can all enjoy the glorious sky's rich tapestry of vivid color.
The blazing light! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.
As God dips his brush in colours dazzling Every sunset becomes a beautiful painting This magic spectacle, we stand watching Till the last streak of light begins waning! Thanks for sharing it.10 for it.
Wow! What a spectacular painting of a colorful, eventful and magical evening. A gift long waited for from a able personality. Thanks Valsa for sharing the mind soothing rhythmic treat.
'The Sun opens his fiery third eye'...this means a lot..a different view of visioning Sun's functioning...a beautiful write on sunset Valsa