A Magic Feather.... The Complete Final Version. Poem by Shaun Cronick

A Magic Feather.... The Complete Final Version.

Rating: 3.8


I am a magic feather,
Forever floating free.
I land on children's pillows,
When they have dreams of me.

They rise to a surprise,
Happy smiles full of glee.
For the colours of a rainbow,
Are displayed all over me.

A treasure to forever keep,
A memory made of gold.
When children awake from sleep.
A dream on which to hold.

Sunday, August 2, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: children,dreams,ethereal,fairy tale,fairy tales,fairytale,magic
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Just forever tweaking this one, I was never happy with the previous versions line and wording length just slowed the flow and beat.
So another rewrite to iron that out.
Still, a poem for all children to enjoy.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Shaun Cronick 28 August 2020

Thank you Dominic for your kind comment and I hope your niece enjoys it too, take care both of you..

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Dominic Windram 03 August 2020

Great poem Shaun..very imaginative....another one to share with my niece! It's definitely a terrific feathery dream inspired ten from me!

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