Saturday, January 7, 2017

A Madonna In Pain Comments

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Did you see her expression, this Madonna in pain,
With face upturned in divine beauty?
Did you see her eyes overflowing with anguish?
So fragile was her expression, I was moved to grieve her grief.
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Lynn W. Petty
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Bri Edwards 13 December 2017

i remember this! i mean the poem. i was going to complain about your use of dusk with dawn, but i found a definition which works; how could i have doubted you! ? - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - adjective literary adjective: dusk 1. shadowy, dim, or dark. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - i'm glad your soul found its rest! how ya doin', my friend? bri :) i'm back from two weeks away. yay!

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Lynn W. Petty

Lynn W. Petty

Newport Beach, California
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