Wednesday, December 14, 2016

A Luta Com Armas Comments

Rating: 5.0

If i would wipe away your tears
I would do this right away
A champion of fight against gun violence you are
Every time i read your updates
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Rose Kanana
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Paul Brookes 15 December 2016

I loved this, it was simple direct and to the point. The last line of the first stanza leaves the reader yearning to help the person referred to and the clever use of anonymity for we do not have we still feel that longing to help. The Spanish ending just perfect. Thanks for sharing. I grieve for the pain that gun crime causes I am lucky to live in the UK where this is rare and guns are not generally around Thanks for sharing and I shall pray a special prayer tonight for all the victims of gun crime and a hope for it end. I believe all life matters and Support Black Lives Matter God be with you Andy

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Brenda Aniban 15 December 2016

may your friend find comfort for the loss

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