Friday, March 24, 2006

A Lush For Your Love Comments

Rating: 5.0

I would give up drinking
To be drunk with your perfume
On a summer night
With the sea breeze singing
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Uriah Hamilton
COMMENTS
Adeeb Alfateh 12 July 2019

To kiss your eyes at midnight, Adorable woman, For whom every aching fiber Of my lonely being craves. superb superb 10+++++++++++++++++++

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Susan Lacovara 03 July 2017

Pour me another glass of your words, like fine delicious wine! !

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Dr Antony Theodore 04 June 2016

i shall give up drinking to drink in your perfume and to live for you and love you and kiss you with intense desire and passion........ tony

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Bernard Snyder 26 October 2015

One of the best poems I've read so far. Keep it up!

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Simone Inez Harriman 23 April 2015

A lovely poem Uriah. Very clever with an apt title as well.

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Mark Heathcote 06 October 2014

Nice work Uriah, the call of a siren that prevents men from drowning.

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Susan Lacovara 22 August 2014

I believe I am now intoxicated from drinking in your lovely verses...strikes the heart's harp. PEACE

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Wild Rose 10 October 2007

Your passion overflows from the heart and is so palpable, an achingly beautiful poem Uriah.

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Will Barber 28 September 2007

Disturbingly beautiful - a love poem filled with anguish. - Will

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Ebone' Ingram 25 November 2006

I'm gonna agree with what Lee said below me. those are the kind of words I dream about. hey...i think the fav's list likes it too. eni da kid

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Lee Degnan 24 October 2006

Wow, if only I could get one man to say these things to me... this is so romantic... ~Lee

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Melvina Germain 12 August 2006

A very soothing expression of love, beautiful. -------Melvina

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Intensity, serenity, absolute beauty in this piece. The first two lines espeically are just perfect and unique. t x

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Joy Vanderhelm 31 March 2006

A blessing is the correct answer. At least, in this case. A wonderful poem, Uriah. Thanks for the uplift.

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John Tiong Chunghoo 27 March 2006

congratulations. keep at it.

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Esther Leclerc 25 March 2006

Now, THAT'S looooooooooove...... Lovely, Uriah.

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Mary Nagy 24 March 2006

Such intense emotion should never be kept to yourself Uriah.......I hope she gets to read your poetry. Sincerely, Mary

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Raynette Eitel 24 March 2006

This one could charm any woman...hope this works for you, my friend. Raynette

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Duncan Wyllie 24 March 2006

A really beautiful write, wonderful flow and so much passion.You're A Star.Love Duncan

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