I would give up drinking
To be drunk with your perfume
On a summer night
With the sea breeze singing
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Pour me another glass of your words, like fine delicious wine! !
i shall give up drinking to drink in your perfume and to live for you and love you and kiss you with intense desire and passion........ tony
A lovely poem Uriah. Very clever with an apt title as well.
Nice work Uriah, the call of a siren that prevents men from drowning.
I believe I am now intoxicated from drinking in your lovely verses...strikes the heart's harp. PEACE
Your passion overflows from the heart and is so palpable, an achingly beautiful poem Uriah.
Disturbingly beautiful - a love poem filled with anguish. - Will
I'm gonna agree with what Lee said below me. those are the kind of words I dream about. hey...i think the fav's list likes it too. eni da kid
Wow, if only I could get one man to say these things to me... this is so romantic... ~Lee
A very soothing expression of love, beautiful. -------Melvina
Intensity, serenity, absolute beauty in this piece. The first two lines espeically are just perfect and unique. t x
A blessing is the correct answer. At least, in this case. A wonderful poem, Uriah. Thanks for the uplift.
Such intense emotion should never be kept to yourself Uriah.......I hope she gets to read your poetry. Sincerely, Mary
This one could charm any woman...hope this works for you, my friend. Raynette
A really beautiful write, wonderful flow and so much passion.You're A Star.Love Duncan
To kiss your eyes at midnight, Adorable woman, For whom every aching fiber Of my lonely being craves. superb superb 10+++++++++++++++++++