Saturday, June 13, 2009

A Luminous Butterfly Comments

Rating: 4.6

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Wonder winged luminous in my eyes.
Elegance sheer I perceive and prize
On a flower who plays the sun of skies.
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Obinna Kenechukwu Eruchie
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a wonderful poem with so beautiful images, thanks for informing me friend about the fake hanaring which is bellow this comment...enjoyed reading these sweet verses.. Influences me its aplomb calm, To rise from seat to be nigh its charm. Magnetised I extend my right arm To induce it to float in my palm. Tenderness on my palm it does stream, Of experience this touch is a dream.

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TaNaRa Hanaring 03 November 2009

This is the stupidest poem I've ever read.

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Chris G. Vaillancourt 11 October 2009

The form works with the message

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 17 September 2009

What psyche fair in colours does rise In flight of swerve and curve amid ease? It my eyes trail wherever to please Me to relish harmony it frees Through me as my heart awes in its choice. My heart sings of its hush to rejoice...........yes always it is matter for rejoice.. butterflies in different colour and they please us whereever they go..beautiful write..i liked it....10 read mine butterflies around... anywhere.. come home

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Prince Obed de la Cruz 29 August 2009

this is a fine and organized poem!

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Gargi Saha 16 August 2009

A wonderful poem..............

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Peter Smits 25 July 2009

Hey Obinna, A powerful work of poetry written here! So many things come in such a well composed way to the readers mind and heart while reading.... Thank you for the sharing! Greetings: Peter

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Sadiqullah Khan 23 July 2009

True, the ride was worth taling on, words and rhyming superb.10

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Mark Nwagwu 18 July 2009

This is unbelievably great! i liked all of it, especially the second stanza that flooded my soul with joy. Keep it up, Obinna, this is a classic.

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Aram Stefanian 12 July 2009

Great poem, I love it! Keep on writing!

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Indira Babbellapati 12 July 2009

butterfly-melody! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

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Wonder winged luminous in my eyes. Elegance sheer I perceive and prize On a flower who plays t......... beautiful write and goodcomposition... i liked it... read mine anywhere... seruius thoughts.. and u promised me

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Siglinde Good 09 July 2009

That WAS breathtaking, actually - so colourful, graceful, rich in nature and simply a pleasure to read.

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Lee Crowell 06 July 2009

wonderful of you Obinna to bless us with yet another winna and surely we will all become thinna as your poems keep us from our nightly dinna seriously, another amazing piece that I wish I could say was penned by me

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Jack Price 05 July 2009

This my friend is one of your finest poems. Great poem and great for visualization of the butterfly especially if you are a fan of them. J. L.

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Uriah Hamilton 05 July 2009

The beauty of God in a butterfly.

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Ershad Mazumder 04 July 2009

Its a great moment to read your mind and soul. I like this kind of poem. Very inspiring. Thanks a lot for sharing.

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Silent Bliss 03 July 2009

thank you for inviting me to read your poem, i trully enjoyed, beautiful words melted with intens emotions, keep up the good work....

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Shawnee Gonzalez 01 July 2009

great use of words and ryhme. i love this poem. ♥ §hawnee♥

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Josephine Dixon-banks 01 July 2009

inner beauty personified in words nature's breath in words words are pictures of invisible wholeness of all pulchritude

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