you exhaust me
your curiosity frustrating
I wish I could hold your energy
just enough in a bottle
...
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When compassion and motherhood combines the sturdiest humanity forms and whispers a lullaby.The best song in the world.
Ah, the spirit and energy of our kids - I wish too for that one dropp some days! You've captured the sweetness and exhaustion of motherhood so very well. Trust me, you will miss it.
That look on your face as they sleep, so contented.The energy that can run full circle has come back to the reader.Beautiful and such pure words.Love Duncan
Lori, Well done work here. Every mother and father knows this lullaby, it's personal, it's intimate. Perhaps it's the last piece of Eden we ever hold. A Pleasure To Read You, Carolynn
My little ones have flown the nest, but God in His wisdom knows best, and they have come back to me in the form of GRANDCHILDREN. Grand being the key word there. Love the poem. Scarlett
dear lori, i could relate and love the keep u in the bottle line. effective
Loti-A lovely lullaby beautifully written...i really like this!
This is such a sweet poem. Very nice, and I can definately relate! Sincerely, Mary
Lori though not a mother but your interpratation was beautiful. Take care Roger