Saturday, November 15, 2008

A Lucky Frog Comments

Rating: 4.7

I walked in to the marshes sad
And spotted him there on the lilly pad
He sat there, so very tiny
With slippery feet that were way too slimy
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Whitney Nicole Albright*
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A beautiful poem expressing the love.

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Keith Hendrickson 20 September 2009

nice concept. very nice flow again. i loved it

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Randy Hogan 26 March 2009

This is a wonderful poem, and fun to read I luvvvvvvvvv it.10+++++++++

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Linda Winchell 16 December 2008

My, My! ! ! Sweet Whitney gal! You does have yaw way with words girl! ! ! ! VERY cute poem! You all got the masters hand at this poetry stuff! God Bless, and Ya'll keep warm now, and aways from them frogs! ! ! They all croak in the end anyways! ! LOL Linda

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The inductive nature of this poem produces a splendid suspense that holds readers captive until the last line. Great write.10/10

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Naseer Ahmed Nasir 20 November 2008

I think you had been fooled into kissing a frog. Some people are also like frog, they frighten if you try to love them. A wonderful poem with new imagery, new experience. The frog was lucky anyway...!

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Dr.subhendu Kar 20 November 2008

does the frog rebound with fear...? ......... wonderful imagery, quite enjoing,10+, thanks for sharing

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Crystal Eloisa Gearhart 15 November 2008

Clever. I'll give you that.

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