Monday, August 19, 2013

A Lucky Escape Comments

Rating: 5.0

Love is her wish with his breathtaking kiss,
He plunder's her soul with his delectable charm,
Warming up her heart, unravelling her dormant desire's,
Puzzling her questioning mind,
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Hazel Durham
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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 May 2019

She knows he has had a lucky escape, As is striking her fragile mind, She is far from well, Clinging onto the dream of explaining to him, Her stumbling destruction over her raw emotions, Her real fear she will never get over his beautiful soul, Wishing to get healed so that finally their love will be sealed........so moving. Beautiful poem amazingly shared.

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Akhtar Jawad 28 October 2014

Human sentiments are a mystery and shall remain a mystery. It's a nice poem expressing emotions that touch the hearts..........10

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 October 2014

Outstanding piece loaded with so many feelings of love, beauty, psyche......extraordinary skills of writing.......

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Achill Lad 12 October 2014

This poem tugs at my heart's strings. Why? Because I knew that lady. Low self esteem is so destructive, so prevalent among women who live in a male dominated society. Such a shame. He loved her for who she was, not for who she wanted to be. I fully understand your message here, Hazel, and the underlying cause. This is a great poem but only touches the surface. Thanks.

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Sir Hosseyn Sabbaghi 27 March 2014

Very nice. I like it...

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Indranil Bhaduri 24 March 2014

A beautiful piece of work...

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Yash Shinde 24 March 2014

.....a deep exploration of human emotions and philosophy, its a beautiful piece having elements of nature, psyche, and beauty...great wrk dear

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V P Mahur 27 February 2014

its really lucky to have a true love that can save our soul. emotional read. Nice one.

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Soulful Heart 18 February 2014

The disquiet of our own insecurities indeed have a way to ddestriy the beauty of moments pure..... so well expressed...todays world of non trust.....

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Kanav Justa 09 November 2013

... that was extraordinary.... such a deep meaning it had... really loved it

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R.benjamin Abate 30 August 2013

Very nice. It's relatable and I like the flow of your poem.

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Lyn Paul 28 August 2013

A superb tale of emotion with hope of a happy ever after. Clever!

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Kayode Peter Ogunleye 25 August 2013

A pleasant writeup on emotion, well presented. thanks for sharing it.

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Heather Wilkins 23 August 2013

a very emotional poem beautifully written ebjoyed

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Valsa George 23 August 2013

Tormented by self pity and hatred, she wonders whether she will be able to reciprocate his adoration for her! She somehow doesn't like to deceive him! Her self realization that she is not worthy of him pains her like a sting! Yet she hopes of a time when oneday she will scale over her limitations and that their relationship will culminate into a beautiful relationship! ! A beautiful exploration into the complex human psyche! !

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Ramesh Rai 21 August 2013

A beautiful emotional write like tender n fragile with nice expression n flow in write are very respectve. deserving 10 +++

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Ramesh Rai 21 August 2013

A beautiful emotional write like tender n fragile with nice expression n flow in write are very respectve. deserving 10 +++

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David Wood 21 August 2013

A deeply emotional poem of loves twists and turns.

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Geetha Jayakumar 19 August 2013

Wow. Wonderful poem...Her emotions are beautifully expressed. Loved reading it.

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Aswath Raman 19 August 2013

Amazing Ma'am! The confusing thoughts brooding over her tender soul and his desire towards her, you have beautifully drawn. When life's two variables become parallel, the never ending, yet surprising paradox, raises questions difficult to answer

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