A Lucky Escape Comments

She knows he has had a lucky escape, As is striking her fragile mind, She is far from well, Clinging onto the dream of explaining to him, Her stumbling destruction over her raw emotions, Her real fear she will never get over his beautiful soul, Wishing to get healed so that finally their love will be sealed........so moving. Beautiful poem amazingly shared.

Human sentiments are a mystery and shall remain a mystery. It's a nice poem expressing emotions that touch the hearts..........10

Outstanding piece loaded with so many feelings of love, beauty, psyche......extraordinary skills of writing.......

This poem tugs at my heart's strings. Why? Because I knew that lady. Low self esteem is so destructive, so prevalent among women who live in a male dominated society. Such a shame. He loved her for who she was, not for who she wanted to be. I fully understand your message here, Hazel, and the underlying cause. This is a great poem but only touches the surface. Thanks.

Very nice. I like it...

A beautiful piece of work...

.....a deep exploration of human emotions and philosophy, its a beautiful piece having elements of nature, psyche, and beauty...great wrk dear

its really lucky to have a true love that can save our soul. emotional read. Nice one.

The disquiet of our own insecurities indeed have a way to ddestriy the beauty of moments pure..... so well expressed...todays world of non trust.....

... that was extraordinary.... such a deep meaning it had... really loved it

Very nice. It's relatable and I like the flow of your poem.

A superb tale of emotion with hope of a happy ever after. Clever!

A pleasant writeup on emotion, well presented. thanks for sharing it.

a very emotional poem beautifully written ebjoyed

Tormented by self pity and hatred, she wonders whether she will be able to reciprocate his adoration for her! She somehow doesn't like to deceive him! Her self realization that she is not worthy of him pains her like a sting! Yet she hopes of a time when oneday she will scale over her limitations and that their relationship will culminate into a beautiful relationship! ! A beautiful exploration into the complex human psyche! !

A beautiful emotional write like tender n fragile with nice expression n flow in write are very respectve. deserving 10 +++

A beautiful emotional write like tender n fragile with nice expression n flow in write are very respectve. deserving 10 +++

A deeply emotional poem of loves twists and turns.

Wow. Wonderful poem...Her emotions are beautifully expressed. Loved reading it.

Amazing Ma'am! The confusing thoughts brooding over her tender soul and his desire towards her, you have beautifully drawn. When life's two variables become parallel, the never ending, yet surprising paradox, raises questions difficult to answer