A Loving Partner Comments

A wonderfully written poem, of new found love, when coming later in life always leaves a question lingering in the mind - wondering if it's real or is it a dream in reality. Totally love this poem, give it a 10 and adding it to my favorite poems. Thank you for sharing. RoseAnn

This impeccable poem of love, so eloquently written, convinces the reader that love is an eternal feeling coming from God.Blessings.Mari.

and i have no choice but to follow my respected colleague....with a resounding yes....! ! ! ranab k Chakraborty(5/29/2010 7: 36: 00 AM) 1st blow..........We found each other in the / orange evening horizon 2nd blow..........Yet our love is in bloom and its / Beauty kept by summer's warmth 3rd blow...........Your love strikes me like a serpent's; / And send love-venom throughout 4th blow............Now, take my life... death is mine. 5th blow............Dear, bear with me in weakness / That I can stand up to my age. Heaven is where, don't know, but where heart is so................heaven can't be too far. LIVE AND LIVE BEYOND.............. Regards, pranab k chakraborty 10+++

You chose this hanging fruit blemishs and all my time. Here! take this ripen berry that's barely attached to the vine. amazing poem, great imagery, a master craftsman weaving wicker baskets from strings of words. to hold Venus's drippings loved reading it...its a tenner no doubt. sat :)

Oh my God..what a poem! very beautiful. you aroused the readers desire for a loving partner in magic way

Fantastic poem! Great imagery with almost perfect style. I am spell bound. What can I say except this that the poem has ruined my comfort. Excellent stuff.

oh miss Almedia that's beautiful! ! why haven't i knew about you? they must make a guide to guide us to great poets! thanks for sharing

1st blow..........We found each other in the / orange evening horizon 2nd blow..........Yet our love is in bloom and its / Beauty kept by summer's warmth 3rd blow...........Your love strikes me like a serpent's; / And send love-venom throughout 4th blow............Now, take my life... death is mine. 5th blow............Dear, bear with me in weakness / That I can stand up to my age. Heaven is where, don't know, but where heart is so................heaven can't be too far. LIVE AND LIVE BEYOND.............. Regards, pranab k chakraborty 10+++

Very lovingly expressed love and intimacy.

We found each other in the orange evening horizon Hearts tugged by moon and Swept up in the wave of time. If ever a woman is happy in her man... I'm she who delights in calming his needs! .. ya it gives unique joy and feeling and one is prepared to give every thing at his/her command.....10 read mine love at first sight....i miss

'...Your love strikes me like a serpent's; And send love-venom throughout...' LoveDeath...by serpent's venom...wow! Snake has some thing to do with Sensuousness... indeed ... beautiful...metaphor.. 10++ Ms. Nivedita UK

Trimmed with a tender touch that is trememdous.

Hold him firmly as the love is very delicate Almeida...........Wonderful poem about the attachment! Many thanks indeed of your lovely comment on my poem.

Very natural, very delicate sentiments - one always nurtures within, but hesitates in expressing - out of shyness or out of fear.... Well said. Vanita.

A loving poem indeed which the reader can feel and the last verse explains it all which is lovely to read and tells you it is written from the heart uavaluvliday regards

beautiful sentiments...romance has no age, Almedia...your concluding stanza lines are really touching...10

wonderful lyrical, symbolistic poem, lovely to read..........10+++++

great poem the words are so strong and so romantic i rated 10

Specially, the last part is great! ! ! ! ! great end

Hey you can write great screen plays.. This is like watching a drama, ... I mean like a scene from a drama.. this is wonderful.. written so passion and love.. great.. Very enjoyable read..felt your liness... with lots of lovess Shan