Tuesday, March 9, 2010

A Loving Dad Comments

Rating: 4.5

I wish I had my dad by my side
Just thinking of him makes me cry
Never being able to get to know him
Hurts me inside everyday that goes by
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chidiebere franklin
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Hans Vr 16 July 2010

This is a very good poem. Full of feeling, great verses. I pray for your strength.

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David Beckham 16 July 2010

Okay, ...this is a 10/10..absolutely fantastic. Everything element captured with great vivid details! Excellent. loved it

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So heartfelt! An amazing emotional write straight from the heart. My father died when I was two..never knew him..So enjoyed; D

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