A Lovers Stroll Comments

Very true - noting can be more mysterious than love. The more you get, the more you'll demand. Lovers are in a stroll - they don't feel to stop... excellent detailing.

..just like the fish in the ocean love can seldom be caught...that was an amazing line.. ..loved this poem Patricia..you are immensely talented and a gifted poetess..please keep writing..I give you a perfect ten for your brilliant writing..

A beautiful, sweet and romantic poem with a sad ending. Everybody wanted them to be in love for ever, holding hand and strolling 'with a hint of gleam in their eyes'. I loved the rhyme, the imagery and of course the theme: Love is not permanent, one got to be prepared to say good bye to it in good grace. Just like the fish in the ocean love can seldom be caught Like seeking a precious jewel its always and ever been sought No one wants to say farewell especially to love so soon Whispering softly to each other they stayed and watched the moon The best stanza I liked.

Hi Patrica a lovely poem.True love is certainly a mystery Well writen

Beautiful poem.. Love is deeper than ocean and cannot be measured, only death can separate the true loved ones..I loved reading each lines..beautifully captured..

a nice write full of good imagery. a lovers stroll so well penned.

Thanks for sharing your thoughts so special we dare not share them.

Beautiful love story. Finally they had to part. Thank you.

these lovers who walk hand in hand will be forever together like the grains of sand.

Let those lovers continue to stroll along the golden strands hand in hand until death do them part! But it is only a wish! They will soon be saddened by the fact that they have to say goodbye! A lovely, romantic poem! !

I really was hoping they would never part. Well penned and delicately sweet, with some really great metaphoric lines

Lovely poem Patricia, very romantic.