Wednesday, January 30, 2013

A Lovers Stroll Comments

Rating: 4.9

Two lovers strolling on the beach walking hand in hand
Barefoot and scantily clad upon the bleached white sand
Their sweet words are many as the sand is on the shore
They held each other tightly as if to part no more
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Patricia Grantham
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Amitava Sur 30 October 2013

Very true - noting can be more mysterious than love. The more you get, the more you'll demand. Lovers are in a stroll - they don't feel to stop... excellent detailing.

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Rigzin Namgyal 07 October 2013

..just like the fish in the ocean love can seldom be caught...that was an amazing line.. ..loved this poem Patricia..you are immensely talented and a gifted poetess..please keep writing..I give you a perfect ten for your brilliant writing..

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Khairul Ahsan 07 September 2013

A beautiful, sweet and romantic poem with a sad ending. Everybody wanted them to be in love for ever, holding hand and strolling 'with a hint of gleam in their eyes'. I loved the rhyme, the imagery and of course the theme: Love is not permanent, one got to be prepared to say good bye to it in good grace. Just like the fish in the ocean love can seldom be caught Like seeking a precious jewel its always and ever been sought No one wants to say farewell especially to love so soon Whispering softly to each other they stayed and watched the moon The best stanza I liked.

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Noreen Carden 05 September 2013

Hi Patrica a lovely poem.True love is certainly a mystery Well writen

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Geetha Jayakumar 28 August 2013

Beautiful poem.. Love is deeper than ocean and cannot be measured, only death can separate the true loved ones..I loved reading each lines..beautifully captured..

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Heather Wilkins 14 August 2013

a nice write full of good imagery. a lovers stroll so well penned.

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R.j. Wynn 06 August 2013

Thanks for sharing your thoughts so special we dare not share them.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 05 August 2013

Beautiful love story. Finally they had to part. Thank you.

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Louis Rams 29 July 2013

these lovers who walk hand in hand will be forever together like the grains of sand.

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Valsa George 23 July 2013

Let those lovers continue to stroll along the golden strands hand in hand until death do them part! But it is only a wish! They will soon be saddened by the fact that they have to say goodbye! A lovely, romantic poem! !

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Joseph Anderson 13 July 2013

I really was hoping they would never part. Well penned and delicately sweet, with some really great metaphoric lines

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Valerie Dohren 30 January 2013

Lovely poem Patricia, very romantic.

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Patricia Grantham

Patricia Grantham

Moncks Corner, South Carolina
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