Thursday, May 3, 2012

A Lovers Moment Comments

Rating: 5.0

Standing too close to me
In this cool late summer evening
Clusters of tiny flies dance to a silent rhythm
like drunk atomic particles
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Simon Collins
COMMENTS
Captain Cur 08 May 2012

You create the scene, the unsaid feelings that speak loudly throughout this poem. An enjoyable and reflective read.

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Kasia Fedyk 04 May 2012

I love this poem Simon, it's very deep, lyrics flow to the rhythm of your heart. Thank you.

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