Wednesday, March 13, 2019

A Lover's Wish Comments

Rating: 5.0

You become my lover tonight
We shall play hide and seek
Under the moonbeam
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M. Asim Nehal
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Gordon Walter 14 March 2019

Nice wish and I pray let it come true. Lovely style, simple words and effective writing.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 March 2019

Lovers play hide and seek. Lovers beautifully share emotion. Love embraces morning light. This is very nice poem amazingly penned.

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Mihaela Pirjol 14 March 2019

Thank you for the invitation to read this poem! It has the ethereal splendour of Sufi poems: it reminds me of the profound incandescence of Rumi's poems: the only one I truly love reading!

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Edward Kofi Louis 13 March 2019

Let your dreams fly! ! ! ! πŸ‘«πŸ˜πŸ€©β˜ΊπŸ€— Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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M Asim Nehal 14 March 2019

Thx Much my friend. Edward..

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T Rajan Evol 13 March 2019

Articulate poem.....Let the river carry your emotions To the sea where my heart is waiting To embrace your love

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M Asim Nehal 14 March 2019

Thx Much TR Evol.

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Mahtab Bangalee 13 March 2019

lovely poem.................

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M Asim Nehal 13 March 2019

Thanks much Mahtab B..

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Kostas Lagos 13 March 2019

A fantastic love poem Mohammed!

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M Asim Nehal 13 March 2019

Thanks much Kostas....

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Dr Dillip K Swain 13 March 2019

Let your dreams fly With the fragrance of rose....perfumed expression! A lovely poem....10

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M Asim Nehal 13 March 2019

Thanks much Dr Dillipji.,

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