Wednesday, November 19, 2008

A Lover's Verse Comments

Rating: 5.0

A sylph is passing my threshold stair,
Drifting her fragrance through the vine,
Promising dreams of a never-could-be
From the loss and the lapse of a former time.
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David Lewis Paget
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Howard Savage 03 January 2016

Being adrift in a restless sleep. Powerful poem.

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F J Thomas 30 July 2014

Such a sensual piece David. To be given in sleep what we do not have while wake is most cruel; yet something to look forward to the next time we rest :) Beautiful David.

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Shania K. Younce 30 March 2014

A very pretty poem. Nice work. Bien!

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Doris Cornago 18 January 2014

Hello David. I came in looking for a young friend and found you. Serendipity. Continue writing such melodious poems. i like sweet and gentle men. Stop drinking but immerse yourself in poetry - it has far greater effects. Yep - a rose is blooming. Thank you

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Noreen Carden 15 September 2013

Hello David i enjoyed every line beautifully written and very sensual WOW

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Cynthia Buhain-baello 26 November 2009

How beautiful and excellently written in perfect verses! I wish I could learn towrite like you. The style and form of this narrative is so dreamy and engaging, the content masterfully woven in, the ending simply prefect.10+++++++++++++

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David Lewis Paget

David Lewis Paget

Nottingham, England/live in Australia
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