Thursday, July 8, 2010

A Lover's Tale Comments

Rating: 5.0

What was once a happy ending is now a sad little story.
She remembered every second that she had spent with him.
With every slash at her wrists,
she remebered the feel of his hands on her.
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Kelsea Osterman
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Ambrose Venessa 04 April 2012

my dear, this is a really touchy one there, i just saved it. i am very impressed.

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WOW i love this poem its awesome i love this poem b/c although it seems cynical to some people i see that its really not but true and maybe not even a complete truth of all that life really is im told im cynical but im not i just see life for what it really is....keep writing always and forever......Great poem

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Cassandra Hooper 09 July 2010

I love it! I love how it mixes real life with story

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IamNo body 08 July 2010

Very vivid, full of pathos -a bit too gory for my personal taste...but bravo for a girl of sixteen to write like that..age will make you subtle, if you don't cut that arm all too often!

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