Monday, January 5, 2009

A Lover's Revenge Comments

Rating: 4.3

A glance back at the past,
Even then it was fake,
We were not meant to last,
You're one giant mistake,
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Derrick Andrews
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Johnathon 08 June 2021

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Katherine Lenninger 25 February 2009

this is what every girl with a broken heart goes through. one of the best poems i have read.

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Lalay Allan 29 January 2009

You've done a wonderful job in releasing my current emotional state of being. thanks.

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Peter Clarkson 16 January 2009

Just how i have been feeling since my boyfriend stopped talking to me, just because i said 'bye bye' at the end of a message. I have told him time and again i didnt mean anything by saying bye bye, in emails and cell phone messages, but still he wont reply. If i had mean't bye bye, i wouldn't have been trying to get hold of him every day for the last 2 weeks. I promised him I wont give up no matter what, and that i am here for him, through thick and thin.

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Agnes Abraham 05 January 2009

wow i really love this poem, i think u have explained exactly how everyone feels when they have been betrayed by someone they love

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