A Lover’s Prayer Comments
Paradise is greed and Hell is a fear,
Oh God! I love just because you are dear,
You are hidden in beauty you are hidden in love,
You are branch of olive in the nib of a dove
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A lovely endearing prayer You are with me I see your light .... very nice
Not afraid though I know you might! You are within me I see your light! .......a prayer from deep heart. Perfect visualization. Many thanks Jawad sir. ....10
yes you are right, God is within every soul, we just have to feel Him, pray Him, hes always there with us at every rise and fall.
At times I fall but I feel your grips, On my forehead I feel your lips, An innocent prayer! This father- son relationship of you with God, I really admire, Akhtar ji! !
A wonderful poem, a wonderful prayer...............................10
An interesting poem about love for God. I'm impressed! You might want to read my short free verse poem Mere Religiosity Vs. True Piety. God bless you! - Shim'onai
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A very honest prayer poem....yes...we should pray to God only for His feet and not anything else...a poem speaking the Truth....nice preaching poem...thanks Akhtar