A Lover's Plea - English Ghazal Comments
Those seven colours of your charm alive
Thus, invite me to own a rainbow of my life
I have fallen from the mountain of my ego
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I love this fascinating English Ghazal, Asim ji. The metaphors used in the poem with a philosophical insight makes the poem truly charming like the seven rainbow colours of life. Wonderful poem that deserves five stars.
In love's plea seven colours come alive to paint life's music and natural love builds a new mansion. A brilliant poem is very well penned with much beauty. An amazing sharing is done really!
Very well penned and beautifully pictorized. Please keep safe the pieces of my feelings in your eye You may require them to shower when I am gone.... beautiful words.
Excellent couplets Those seven colours of your charm alive Thus, invite me to own a rainbow of my life
Superb poem with fine couplets...I pick: I have fallen from the mountain of my ego To the depths of your sea like a waterfall
Awesome.... Please keep safe the pieces of my feelings in your eye You may require them to shower when I am gone.
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7/28/2025 10:03:02 AM # 1.0.0
Heart-felt words throughout...beautiful Gazal