Monday, July 6, 2009

A Lover's Farewell Comments

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The time has come
To bid old friends goodbye,
Without a backward glance,
Or question why,
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Josephine Dunn
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Khairul Ahsan 17 November 2020

'For what we have Is more than this, So goes far deeper Than a stolen kiss From lips that promise More than they give.' - Loved these lines. So beautifully said!

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Hebert Logerie Sr. 25 July 2009

The nostalgic feelings of a not-too-distant past and the sad souvenirs are spicy ingredients for a very somber poem.

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The time has come To bid old friends goodbye, Without a backward glance, Or question why, So take a great step forwards And make brave plans For future times, And lives, And loves.....ut never say a good bye.. it is just begining of new game... lovely write read mine nevr say die and bidding fare well with final aideu, Jackson

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