Thursday, July 21, 2011

A Lover’s Enlightenment Comments

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How come nobody told me, that the sun sits in the sky,
That he warms the hearts of lovers as he slowly passes by.
His colours like an orchestra, all awaiting his command,
He conducts them across the ocean, spilling out upon the sand.
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Daniel P Martin
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Jacqui Broad 17 October 2011

Wonderful poem of love. It really changes everything...

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Sharron Stephenson 02 September 2011

i like this poem alot you seam to have a knack to read poeple heart keep it up

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Eric Cockrell 01 September 2011

the rare moments of real living that we call love... you capture it well! good poetry!

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Vanessa Hughes 23 July 2011

Beautiful poem, really enjoyed it. Nessy x

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