Tuesday, April 30, 2013

A Lover's Appeal Comments

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The planets in the sky mingle
With the stars both dull and bright,
Merges and mingle do rivers with the ocean
After the hurdles they encounter and crosses,
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Rajesh Thankappan
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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 23 February 2015

Great feelings of love scripted with wonderful lines.....Rajeshji......kudos!

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Geetha Jayakumar 20 July 2014

.Wow.. A fantastic lines... Why not you now become mine! Why not you now surrender your mind! Beautiful poem and pleasant flow of words....And the topic fits perfectly well with poem. Loved reading it.

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal 10 October 2013

Why not you now surrender your mind! ... good appeal.. nice one

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