Wednesday, March 19, 2014

A Lover's Ambition Comments

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The day you met me for the first time,
Your footsteps in my ears created chime.
Your thoughts dug in my mind a deep hole,
As you occupied a space in my heart and soul...
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Tawfeeq Hasan Khan
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Tawfeeq Hasan Khan 24 April 2014

Thank you Hira and thanks a lot.

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Hira Akhtar 24 April 2014

poems are written by feeling them deeply, its just like diving in the ocean of thoughts...and I think you've done this very nicely :) a nice poem for your loved one :) keep writing regards hira

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Dave Walker 19 March 2014

Love is the best thing in the world, a great poem.

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Gajanan Mishra 19 March 2014

I love you once and always, good writing, thanks. Please read my poems and comment.

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Tawfeeq Hasan Khan

Tawfeeq Hasan Khan

Bilaspur, Chhattisgarh, India
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